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by Richard Lehnert
July 1988
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JONI MITCHELL: Chalk Mark In A Rain Storm. Geffen 24172-1 (LP), 24172-2 (CD). Dan Marnien, engineer; Joni Mitchell, Larry Klein, producers. AAD. TT: 46:27.

When I picked up this album, I reminded myself that, ever since Blue, I've liked none of Joni Mitchell's records on the first few listenings. It's always taken a while for them to establish their invariably new and challenging musical languages before I can actually hear what's being said musically. It's always been well worth the effort. But for the first time in almost twenty years, I like an album of hers less with each listening. There's a bittersweet tragedy here: that of a meticulous craftsperson whose inspiration has flown. She offers us ornate presents, not simple gifts.

Mitchell's musical development has been inexorable, with nary a false step or digression. No album has been like any other. Many thought, particularly in the '70s, that she carried self-expression in the name of art to solipsistic, humorless extremes. She lost many listeners with The Hissing Of Summer Lawns, even more with Mingus, but those who stuck with her (yers truly) were seldom disappointed. Though no one has ever questioned her seriousness or commitment to her art, it's also true that few, if any, of the songs she's written in the last fifteen years have been covered. As she's slowly edged into full-blown rockdom, she's also left standard meter and melody behind.

Pervasive in her work is a steadily encroaching impressionism. Over the last twenty years, her music, words, and paintings have slowly left behind the rigors of established song structure, meter, and outline, resulting now in Chalk Mark In A Rain Storm; the very title speaks of blurred lines washing away, Monet-like. We are left with an intensely sensual aestheticism---the work of a dilettante of awesome sophistication.

The "songs" are painterly collages, space-music driftings; highly processed guitar and keyboard sounds waft in, one to five Jonis dance a vocalise in space, a word or phrase is whispered, shouted, moaned, sometimes even sung, and then---as on her previous two albums---the metallic rhythm section kicks in. Even the impressive cameo appearances are sampled and keyed in---more borrowed colors from Mitchell's global Synclavier than actual duets.

That long list of guest singers---Willie Nelson, Peter Gabriel, Wendy & Lisa, Tom Petty, Bill Idol, Don Henley, Iron Eyes Cody (!), Benjamin Orr---seldom get even a whole line to sing; usually just a word or two at a time. Cody, like so many Native Americans before him, is reduced to local color---a little red thrown in to darken the relentless pastels.

Regardless of her, I'm sure, good intentions, it's hard to hear rich, white, Southern Californian Mitchell sing "I am Lakota!" The hell she is! I'm well aware of the convention of the dramatic monologue, but in the context of the song's sumptuous sonics and Mitchell's notoriously self-referential writing style, I just can't buy it. How easily could she have gotten away with singing, say, "I am black!"?

She also presumes, in "The Beat of Black Wings," to tell the story of a Vietnam War vet: "This is his story / It's a tough one for me to sing," she sings. I submit that doing anything well is tough; that comes with the territory. For the first time, I find Mitchell's confessional tendencies offensive, intrusive, condescending, and unnecessary.

And what to do with such lines as "Stuck in the romantic tradition / Of acting rough and tough" (from "Dancin' Clown," describing Rawhide's Rowdy Yates)? It scans like oatmeal. Increasingly, Mitchell tells without showing, and her work is the weaker for it. True, most of the time she's a good enough singer to make these lines work; but her advances in vocal technique seem entirely at the cost of her songwriting skill. Other than that, though, "Dancin' Clown" is a lot of fun, with Petty and Idol tossing in their two cents' worth from time to time.

Mitchell takes on the media in "The Reoccurring Dream," the most deliberately collage-like assemblage here. Snippets of TV and radio ads are cut in to an equally fragmented pastiche of such lines as, "If you use this shampoo / True love will come to you / If you had that house, car, bottle, jar / Your lovers would look like movie stars." Joni Mitchell discovers corporate hypocrisy as she graces the cover of her album looking like a movie star, tres Garboesque.

Mitchell, as much a media commodity herself as any food processor you could name, was a lot more honest when she sang, on the title song of 1972's For The Roses, "I guess I seem ungrateful / With my teeth sunk in the hand / That brings me things / I really can't give up just yet." Graceless, perhaps, but pretty self-challenging for a major music entity; at least it's social responsibility worked out in her own life, not a self-righteous attack on the easy targets of huge institutions everyone knows are beyond hope. As she herself questioned in the same song---"Now I sit up here, the critic", irresponsible criticism is the easiest thing in the world. (Don't I know it!) Having written and sung the intricate puzzlework of "Reoccurring Dream," the germane question [for] Mitchell is: has [she] trashed her own TV? I have. Revolution begins at home.

Chalk Mark In A Rain Storm is, on the whole, entertaining and well-meaning enough, but "significance" and "relevance" are just so many commodities here. Without paying attention overmuch to "The Beat Of Black Wings"' words, you might think [she's] singing of nursing a Mai-Tai on some Hawaiian lagoon. Irony? I wonder. Iron Eyes Cody starts out "Lakota" with a few seconds of unaccompanied chant, but is then just another track sweetening the usual programmed-drum rhythm track. There is no silence or stillness left in Joni Mitchell's music. There used to be a lot. What's she afraid of?

Chalk Mark adds up to quite a bit less than the sum of its many parts. (Check out Jane Siberry's recent The Walking, Reprise 25678, for some of the vulnerability I now miss in Mitchell's work.) Don't get me wrong. Texturally, the music is extremely fine, even rarefied. You'll hear tone colors and juxtapositions of voice and instrument that you'll hear nowhere else. Mitchell's formidable intelligence, here determinedly contemporary and relentlessly tasteful, is evident in each voicing of throat and string. Though baroquely assembled, there is no fat on Chalk Mark; the uninteresting rhythm section excepted, you hear and appreciate what she's left out as much as what she's included.

Mitchell's voice is loose and fluid throughout---many times improved over the pinched, nasal, breathless instrument it often was in the '60s, though here she uses it more dramatically than musically. Except for the fact that there are no original "songs," as such, the music is stunningly played and arranged, worthy of Weather Report or Elvis Costello. The album is a sonic treat. Husband Larry Klein, late of Wayne Shorter's band, is a fluid if unremarkable bassist, and shares composition credits (to little effect one way or another, as far as I can tell) on three songs. The soundstage, though of course entirely synthetic, is much more convincing on LP; the CD flattens it out considerably. The LP sounds more romantic, its slightly darker patina more fitting to the music.

Yes, a lot of hard work has gone into Chalk Mark. But you know you're in trouble when the two best songs on a Joni Mitchell album are covers, f'crissakes; in this case, "Corinna, Corrina" (called here "A Bird That Whistles") and "Cool Water," Bob Nolan's old Sons Of The Pioneers chestnut. "Cool Water" opens seductively, in classic Mitchell-Metheny-Hejira style, but "Corinna," the final cut, is particularly welcome. Like Dylan's harmonica-and-guitar "Dark Eyes" coming at the end of Empire Burlesque's 45 minutes of big-beat synth-pop, "Corinna"'s trio of acoustic guitar, bass, and Wayne Shorter (god bless 'im) on all manner of twittering, fluttering saxes is a breath of creek-cooled mountain air.

I don't get it. Can't these people hear how good something like this sounds? Why not a whole album's worth? So often, it's the seemingly breezy throwaways we toss off in unguarded moments, uncaring of the readers/listeners over our shoulders, that are real and true. "Corinna" works because it's vulnerable. And Joni can almost sing the blues now---sort of.

It seems [like] rank ingratitude to jump on Joni in a world of Madonnas, Tiffanys, and other bimbos. But we expect little from the latter, and they've never given us reason to expect more. Mitchell has given us a great deal in the past---perhaps too much of what [Stereophile reviewer] Les Berkley calls her "almost frightening intimacy." Unfortunately, her favorite step is still the Boho Dance. It's all very post-modern (whatever that means) and ultimately trivial. Again, from "For the Roses": "Remember the days when you used to sit / And make up your tunes for love / And pour your simple sorrow / To the soundhole and your knee?"

Yes, I remember. Mitchell apparently does not. The "star maker machinery behind the popular song" has triumphed over the woman who gave it a name.

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mark.mckendrick on

What an absurd review. A rambling string of raked refuse by someone unable to accept an artist maturing, having some success and actually having something to say apart from any sentimental turgid nonsense that is about.... getting old. Christ, have you heard the shit ABBA pump out, for fuck's sake? The author of this absurd review needs to stop listening to music, stop making comparative references to younger, less successful 'artists' and - I don't know - maybe take up food criticism or something.